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FIRST

We shouldn't cross in the streets

beautiful looks of beautiful creatures,

no more hearing voices

of those sirens with illegal perfumes,

I did not deny, 

I didn't even manage to regret

when I'm against her, 

and when we love, 

first of all we don't count.

We forgive one day all the acts, 

we hardly forget the effects of love,

an abnormal story

but beautiful same news.

First I love you, 

but what can I do if I love her too?

And yet there are so many 

who love no one,

do we know if love exists?

When music is pretty,

tell me who deserves 

the love for a lifetime?







Commentaires

Sounds like someone's heart could be straying? Stay true to her and to you!
ellie a dit…
Awesome from Morphine! Yes, in those younger days, it wasn't unusual to have at least two or three waiting, in case this one didn't work out and then I might wonder later, did I even love myself? Those desires can be a tangled web.
Caitlin'nMegan a dit…
Such a great imagery you've creative, as well as a slice of life that some seldom admit to. Thanks so much!
Ivy's Closet a dit…
Oh, I like how you are mixing it up. We can learn a lot about ourselves, maybe. Thank you for your wonderful poetry.
J.P. Alexander a dit…
Me gusto el poema y el video. Te mando un beso.
Jaime Portela a dit…
Nice poem.
Have a good week.
Hugs.
snobe casamang a dit…
I will, thanks martha jane, wish you a happy week.
snobe casamang a dit…
Yes desires can be a tangled web when you are young, thanks a lot ellie for your lovely words and happy start of the week..
snobe casamang a dit…
A slice of life that's true, I like your style so much, wish you a nice week dear ellie.
snobe casamang a dit…
I like your very nice style too, thanks a lot for reading and liking my words.
snobe casamang a dit…
Muchas gracias judit por siempre gostar, te mando besos.
snobe casamang a dit…
Thanks jaime, have a nice week too, hugs.
Lovely poem!

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good afternoon
the poem is very good and I liked it.
Thank you very much for your visit to my space.
I wish you a very happy week full of health and lots of inspiration.
thanks.
a kiss
snobe casamang a dit…
Thanks kathrine Eldridge.
snobe casamang a dit…
Thanks a lot for your nice comment, I wish you a happy end of the week, kisses.
Un poema muy sentido💓
snobe casamang a dit…
Muchas gracias soledad por tus lindas palabras, te deseo un buen fin de semana.