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cold and desolate

Not a single evening passes

where the desire 

to take you in my empty arms

signs the start of 

a long night without you

where only words can heal 

my burning heart

as I stare to the horizon

hoping that dawn will bring 

the warmth of your gaze

but your absence remains 

cold and desolate

where I lose myself 

in our illusory embraces.

My life was only regrets

sorrows and sometimes hopes

broken dreams in a long silence

every beat of my heart 

felt like in despair

like a lost echo

in the infinity of the day.

I watch the stars 

looking for your  path

the hours stretch slow

and without respite

in this void where I sink endlessly

where everything seems without light

without life 

without you.



Commentaires

Jaime Portela a dit…
A perda do amor cria o frio e a desolação da alma.
Excelente poema, gostei muito.
Continuação de boa semana.
Um abraço.
I feel the loneliness in your words. Incredible poem!

https://www.kathrineeldridge.com
ellie a dit…
Oh, you do bring sorrow to a new level. Such a poignant poem. All the best to staying inspired in all that you do.
Ivy's Closet a dit…
Wonderful to see your work. You always have such a beautiful dance with words which have such a great history of the soul.
Conchi a dit…
Bonito pero triste poema.

Un abrazo.
J.P. Alexander a dit…
Melancólico poema. Te mando un beso.
LoveT. a dit…
That's sad and beautiful at the same time.
I am a new Follower :)
Meulen a dit…
A veces perder es ganancia, depende con que ojos se le mire...
Buen fin de semana.
snobe casamang a dit…
Thanks a lot my friend for your nice comment, I wish you a happy sunday.
snobe casamang a dit…
Sorry dear kathrine, and thanks for your nice comment. I wish you a happy sunday.
snobe casamang a dit…
Thanks a lot ellie for your words and encouragement. I wish you a happy sunday.
snobe casamang a dit…
Always wonderful to see your comments, thanks a lot. I wish you a happy sunday.
snobe casamang a dit…
Muchas gracias conchi por tu commentario, abrazos y feliz fin de semana.
snobe casamang a dit…
Muchas gracias judit por gostar, besos y te deseo un buen fin de semana.
snobe casamang a dit…
Yes mix of both feelings, thanks for following and liking my blog. I wish you a happy weekend.
snobe casamang a dit…
Muchas gracias amiga por tus lindas palavras, te deseo un buen fin de semana tambien.
SOL da Esteva a dit…
Poema factual Desolação, é sintoma de grande tristeza que só o Amor pode aquecer e dar conforto.
Magnífico! Parabéns.


Abraço,
SOL da Esteva
Bill a dit…
A well written poem, very nice to read.
snobe casamang a dit…
Thanks for reading and liking dear Bill, have a nice sunday.
snobe casamang a dit…
Thanks a lot dear friend SOL da Esteva for your nice words, wish you a happy sunday.