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looking at the deep of rivers and oceans

 

I shall build up inflexible 

and insisting walls,

circling fences ,

at least to detain corporal organs.

In need, 

like imagination and electric motion,

I shall quickly discard and depart from here ,

forgetting my ownself  like a mad man,

maybe presences on isolated, 

inhabitable and infertile deserts,

in fearful Amazon jungles, 

even in the further lands without you,

it is I who will be alone. 

I shall stand against wind's blows

and huge cyclones,

I will climb up like birds

on highest peak of mountains,

also more than it 

on high and high places not on your Earth ,

address of my home will be great spaces

not your lively and lovely face ,

in need,

I meet and embrace the challenges of waters,

looking at the deep of rivers and oceans,

I shall swim and dive,

please, assess and evaluate my echoes 

without your heartfelt love, 

nothing else,

nothing in front of my senses .

Please open your eyes

at present in front of this lover,

to attract and hold back 

our best and loving memories.



Commentaires

ellie a dit…
I liked how you ended this. So thoughtful and loving. A very beautiful piece.
Caitlin'nMegan a dit…
So lovely. I enjoyed it so much. Wishing you much happiness this Valentines Day ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
So much longing and sadness in this one, yet affirming at the same time. Blessings!
snobe casamang a dit…
Thanks a lot for liking, you're a beautiful reader of my poetry.
snobe casamang a dit…
Thanks for your lovely comment and happy Valentine ❤️❤️❤️
snobe casamang a dit…
You know so much different emotions in a relation, thanks a lot for commenting.
J.P. Alexander a dit…
Uy me dejaste sin palabras. Muy bello poema. Te mando un beso.
Meulen a dit…
Los recuerdos más importantes deben prevalecer siempre
Abrazo
Manuel a dit…
Estimado amigo, siento decirte que en esta ocasión la traducción de Google, no ha sido buena, por lo que no logro entender el mensaje de tu poema, a ver si en la próxima tengo más suerte.
Un abrazo.
Rajani Rehana a dit…
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Adrasteja a dit…
This poem expresses inner struggle and the overwhelming sense of loneliness. The speaker describes building walls to protect himself, seeking isolation in distant, inhospitable places. Yet, the absence of love and meaningful connections leaves him yearning for the memories of affection. Despite his efforts to escape, he cannot avoid the emotional void that remains. It's a poignant reflection on the tension between seeking solitude and the need for emotional warmth. Thank you for that :)
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snobe casamang a dit…
Muchas gracias judit por lindas palabras, te mando un beso tambien.
snobe casamang a dit…
Si tienes razon amiga, siempre prevalecer , abrazo.
snobe casamang a dit…
Thanks ana , have a lovely day.
snobe casamang a dit…
Haha ok my friend, thanks for your comment, have a nice day, hug.
snobe casamang a dit…
Thank youuu, have a good day.
snobe casamang a dit…
Sure, I always did.
snobe casamang a dit…
You're welcome my dear, I loved your words about my poem sooo much, yes despite the efforts to escape, we can not avoid the emotional void that remains, thanks a lot once more, have a nice end of the week, send you a kiss.
Benita James a dit…
What a lovely poetry, took me back to the days in high school during literature class.
What a beautiful poem!

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snobe casamang a dit…
I'm so happy that you liked my poem and that it reminded you of your lovely days in high school, wish you a happy weekend.
snobe casamang a dit…
Thanks kathrine for reading and liking, wish you a nice weekend.