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It stays in the soul

I saw you and my heart began to sing,  

but your eyes never knew how to listen.  

I loved you with a force I couldn’t silence,  

but in your silence, everything faded away.

Love doesn’t always find its place,  

sometimes it gets lost, not knowing where it is. 

My words vanish with the wind,  

while you continue with your own thoughts.

I loved you without a reason,

without time or an end, 

but love doesn’t always follow a good path.  

What wasn’t? What couldn’t be?  

It stays in the soul, an eternal longing.



Comments

Aarti said…
This is so beautifully haunting and filled with raw emotion. The way you capture love’s intensity, yet its heartbreaking silence, is truly touching. 💔 The imagery of love getting lost and words vanishing in the wind evokes such a deep sense of longing. “It stays in the soul” is such a powerful ending—some emotions never truly fade. Absolutely stunning and deeply resonant! ✨
Allurerage
So beautifully and mournfully expressed.
J.P. Alexander said…
Uy que lindo y romántico poema.
MELODY JACOB said…
Such a beautiful and poignant reflection on unrequited love and the bittersweet feeling of something that never fully came to be. The way the words capture the longing, silence, and timelessness of love that never found its place is so powerful. It's heartbreaking yet poetic how the emotions linger, staying in the soul as an eternal ache. It's a reminder that sometimes love, no matter how deep, doesn’t always find its way—but it stays with us forever.
snobe casamang said…
Thanks ana for lovely comment.
snobe casamang said…
You think so? Thanks a lot for nice comment.
snobe casamang said…
Muchas gracias por lindas palabras.
snobe casamang said…
WOW thanks a lot my dear for your beautiful words that touched deeply my heart.
snobe casamang said…
You know, if emotions are not intense there's no true love, thanks a lot for beautiful comment.

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