Deeply emotional

Deeply emotional

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What a deeply emotional and evocative piece of the day! The flow of words creates a haunting, wistful atmosphere, where love and pain intertvine in a profound way. The way you express longing and loss, while still holding on to beautiful memories, speaks directly to the heart. I dreamt of you tonight, my love! set the tone for my entire poem, immersing in a dream like state where reality and imagination blur. There’s a rawness in the words, particularly when I speak of  a soul crying, and yearning for connection across time and space. The repetition of “Every single night” reinforces the never ending nature of my longing, emphasizing how the love transcends your physical presence and resides in memories and dreams. The imagery of kisses and hugs in the relation is so tender and vivid, it paints a picture of an eternal love that even time can not erase. The theme of love lingering in the past, intertvined with the passage of time, creates a sense of bittersweet nostalgia. Even thoug...
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S U D D E N L Y

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 Suddenly you're in my life,

part of everything I do,

you're my only step for happiness,

and in your arms

I feel paradise.

I'm trying to keep hold on you,

so say that you will stay here,

we can make it shine,

we can take forever

just a minute at a time.




Comments

Martha Jane Orlando said…
I love this!!! Thanks for sharing.
March 23, 2024 at 6:50 PM
ellie said…
So lovely! Adoring your nature in poetry. Thanks so much!
March 24, 2024 at 12:36 PM
Caitlin'nMegan said…
Love this. So great to read your words. Love the art too! All the best to your creativity!
March 24, 2024 at 12:37 PM
Jaime Portela said…
Take forever just a minute at a time its enough...
Excellent poem.
Have a good week and a Happy Easter.
Hugs.
March 25, 2024 at 11:10 AM
snobe casamang said…
Thanks a lot martha jane for liking.
March 30, 2024 at 2:19 PM
snobe casamang said…
Thanks ellie for adoring my poetry, I really appreciate.
March 30, 2024 at 2:19 PM
snobe casamang said…
All the best also caitlin'n Megan , thanks for your nice words.
March 30, 2024 at 2:20 PM
snobe casamang said…
Thanks Jaime for your encouraging words, I really apprecaite. Happy weekend; hugs.
March 30, 2024 at 2:21 PM
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