What a deeply emotional and evocative piece of the day! The flow of words creates a haunting, wistful atmosphere, where love and pain intertvine in a profound way. The way you express longing and loss, while still holding on to beautiful memories, speaks directly to the heart. I dreamt of you tonight, my love! set the tone for my entire poem, immersing in a dream like state where reality and imagination blur. There’s a rawness in the words, particularly when I speak of a soul crying, and yearning for connection across time and space. The repetition of “Every single night” reinforces the never ending nature of my longing, emphasizing how the love transcends your physical presence and resides in memories and dreams. The imagery of kisses and hugs in the relation is so tender and vivid, it paints a picture of an eternal love that even time can not erase. The theme of love lingering in the past, intertvined with the passage of time, creates a sense of bittersweet nostalgia. Even thoug...
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All the best Jan