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WHEN YOUR HEART IS WEAK

What's the matter with the way we look?

surely it's not the end,
I've only meant to make my emotions clear,
you worry too much if I understand,
should we be seen as friends,
seems like a real good beginning right here,
when your heart is weak,
I'm gonna pick the lock on it,
my fingertips won't fail me,
no matter what you do.
The love you can not see yet,
is about to witness a dawning
and you can twist and turn,
but you won't get loose,
better forget getting rid of me,
I don't see how you can,
you put me off 
and I will hunt you down again,
I'm mighty patient when I have to be,
you have given me that,
still I look forward to 
the day you let me in.



Comments

J.P. Alexander said…
Lindo y sentido poema. Me gusto mucho y me hizo pensar. Te mando un beso.
ellie said…
You are a great romantic! Such a touching poem. So much depth. Thank you so much for this piece.
Caitlin&Megan said…
Wonderful poetry. You know how to get to the crux of an everlasting love that some cannot touch. You write in such a wonderful way. Love your creativity ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
Heartfelt and heartbreaking at the same time.
snobe casamang said…
Muchas gracias Judit por gustar, te mando besos tambien.
snobe casamang said…
Thanks a lot Irina for your nice comment.
snobe casamang said…
You're welcome ellie, thanks a lot for liking.
snobe casamang said…
Really? I try to write romantic and creative poetry, thanks for liking.
snobe casamang said…
That's true but nice poem and song, is not it?
Anonymous said…
Beautiful poem..thanks for sharing dear :-)
Fine Art and You
snobe casamang said…
You welcome, thanks a lot for your nice comment.