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IS THIS A DREAM

Is this a dream,

when I speak , 

I can't hear me ,

I'm at peace 

or I'm not living ,

I'm just dreaming.

My eyes are closed ,

I'm on the ceiling ,

looking down on me ,

I can see that I am sleeping. 

How can that be  , 

I can't feel me , 

is this real ,

I'm not leaving .

A peaceful easy feeling

and I'm believing, 

I'm not leaving , 

How can I see me from the ceiling, 

my eyes are closed ,

it's a dream that I see,

I am dreaming.






Comments

And quite the dream that was!
Fá menor said…
Muito bom.
Que haja sempre assim uma sensação de paz e tranquilidade.
Well, if this is just a dream... But what if it is death?
ellie said…
Or a close call! I had that feeling once when I was going into surgery. Beautifully written!
Caitlin&Megan said…
You definitely caught the emotion of this sensation. Thanks so much for this piece.
snobe casamang said…
Yes thanks alot to your comment dear Martha jane.
snobe casamang said…
Thank you my dear, wish you a happy week-end.
snobe casamang said…
It is just a dream dear Irina, have a Nice friday.
snobe casamang said…
Thanks dear ellie, hope you Will always feel well.
snobe casamang said…
Welcome my dear, thanks alot for always reading and liking, Wish you happy friday.
Meulen said…
Del amor mejor se resguarda vivo en el corazón!
snobe casamang said…
Si amiga magdalena, muchas gracias por tu lindo comentario.