look like a desperate person?

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I had a dream with you 

that you were coming back to me

my love for you is fading

but you show signs that you are no longer

that you don't want to stay at all

and not even tell me what you have

who stole you from my life

to look for you like a desperate person?

Suddenly, I don't wake up with you in bed

I wouldn't want to wake up again

if I knew you were leaving again

I'd rather not love anymore.

You've started to be different

don't call anymore

but my heart is not a hotel

I don't want to stay either

I have love but who to give it to

how many times do you think 

I could take it from scratch.




Comments

J.P. Alexander said…
Melancólico y romántico poema. Te mando un beso.
April 17, 2025 at 2:56 AM
Giorgio said…
Your beautiful words made me think that many people hate love.
April 17, 2025 at 3:45 PM
Martha Jane Orlando said…
Loving someone and having that person not reciprocate that love is heart-breaking, indeed.
April 17, 2025 at 4:41 PM
snobe casamang said…
Thanks to all my beautiful friends bloggers for your comments, I really appreciate, wish you always to live happy moments and nice times.
April 20, 2025 at 3:45 PM
Юлия 17-12 said…
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April 21, 2025 at 2:44 PM
Юлия 17-12 said…
Beautiful blog!🌷🌷🌷❤❤❤
April 21, 2025 at 2:45 PM
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